Every love interest and h-scene involving the MC is optional and fully avoidable. This does not mean that you can choose to opt out of certain stories altogether. While romance with a character is fully optional, most friendships are not.
The futa/trans tag refers to Frankie, a trans-girl, who is an optional love interest and close friend to the MC.
Finished playing through the redo of Chapter 1. Really enjoyed it, the rewriting is much better paced and things feel like they happen way less abruptly. Plus the ramen scene was a fun way to foreshadow things.
yeah, as far as i know, this is a pretty normal thing. i think it's asking in a roundabout way for storage permissions (this is what some barebones research tells me as i don't have an android myself). i absolutely would understand being uncomfortable with this kind of permission request, but from what i can tell it's very normal and common. i can tell you that i trust blackeye (my android porter) and this specific update has been downloaded a few thousand times without complaint, but i'm sorry i don't have more info about why it asks that!
That is a weird way to ask for storage permission but if the creator of the game trusts the program and no one else in the comments have brought this issue up, I'm going to take a chance. Will let you know if anything weird happens and thanks for replying so fast!
First Question did you download the game from devs page on itchio if not it could be a reworked game with virus. Most of these games you find on itchio don’t have viruses but I have in the past have had a few flagged by Norton. If you are using a device you buy items with or have personal info on. I would advise against allowing anyone access. The reason for photo access is some people take pictures of their account passwords and email passwords. Chuckles here’s a tip when ever you get a new device make sure you take out the memory chip out of the old device. If you don’t and you lose it or leave it when you move you never know who may get their hands on your info.
Just finished .4 with ch1 redone. Here are my thoughts so far.
First, this story is incredible. The originality, and urban fantasy elements make this a fun and engaging story. The artwork is very well done, as are the animations. I'm sure I'll be happy to start over when chapter 2 is reworked, and more content is available.
The characters are all individual, and special. The dialogue for each of them is believable. Nice jobe there. Except for a few spelling mistakes, the only dialogue mistake I saw was near the beginning, when the liquor store lady was yelling at Sasha. She said she'd call the polizia, not the police.
I am enjoying the shit out of this. The only negative for me is the bits of chaotic text and imagery. You know, those moments of high emotion that cause the characters to act like they are in an old Japanese cartoon. They are too unfocused and chaotic for my tastes. I realize this was done on purpose, it's part of the author's telling of the story. So I will live with it. Just voicing my opinion.
All in all, very well done so far, and I look forward to the next major update.
which one? They all seem to be working fine for me :) i included a few mirrors in the game info page as well as on my patreon, if you'd like to try another! sorry about that issue
Just needed to comment: This is genuinely one of the more well-written VNs I've played recently. It's consistently engaging, its paced really well, and you've made the characters (and protag) so incredibly likeable in a very natural way. The slapstick humor and meta stuff is also done really well -- a lot of times it comes across really heavy-handed in other VNs but you space it out really well.
what website do you usually like to download from? i'm currently uploading the most recent update to patreon, so i can make sure to try to include a different mirror next time
Itch doesn't let you upload files bigger than 1GB for the most part and GDrive has similar throttling limits wahhh. I uploaded a MixDrop link, and I hope that works! If it doesn't, there are additional mirrors available linked from my Patreon post. Sorry for the headache! I hope you guys enjoy the update :')
Hello ! I downloaded the game months ago and only just played it (i have only up to chapter 3 so this may have been fixed), but in the scene where mc (wake, i believe) has blue eyes and is in byrus' home, the maid says "ta guele". However, it should be "ta gueule" for it to be an actual french shut up, hope it helps (also, amazing game, love the story, the jokes and everything, music is good, as you said, and there's a lot of cultural references I love, keep going !
thank you so much!!! there is more french in chapter 4 so if you get around to playing more of the game, please let me know if you find any more errors xD I really appreciate it! <3
Hello, I played Chapter 4 and didn't see anything that seemed wrong (though it is a bit old-fashioned and no one really speaks like that nowadays, but I don't expect any slang, especially if she's been a maid all her life)
I tried to make her dialogue sound overly dramatic and almost like she was cursing people lmao as long as it makes sense!! thank you so much for the help!! :)
I love the game. It is definitely in my top 5. The story is absolutely wonderful and I enjoy how you ease into the tenser aspects as well as how much personality you give to all the characters. You are doing great.
I really like your game. The writing is very well done with just the right amount of comedy. My only real critique would be the enormous boobs way too many of the girls seem to have (Abby, Sasha and Emma are just right). I hope you're able to put out updates fairly often because I'm very much enjoying this.
I'm gonna be honest if I was in the MC's situation and the first thing that happens when I walk into school is the guy on the intercom calling me out and revealing everything about my situation to everyone...
I think I'd die of a heart attack right then and there... That's just uncalled for intercom guy.
Hello, first off wanted to let you know I'm loving the game so far. The story is exciting, and the characters are wonderful. I saw that you don't do the port for the android version yourself, but wanted to mention anyways that replaying scenes in the gallery doesnt seem to be working right. When you click on a scene, the box pops up with the mouse click options. But no matter where i click on the screen, it just backs out to the previous menu screen.
🤦♂️ man how am i only now learning this?! thanks for bringing it to my attention. hopefully i can get the porters to do something about this <3 i'm really sorry!!
0.3 was wonderful. It looks like the Android version of 0.4 won't update the 0.3 version, though, and tries to make a second install of the game. It also gives me an error about incorrect/out-of-date app permissions, which the 0.3 version didn't have.
i don't make the android ports myself (I don't have an android and can't test them), but I haven't had any issues reported like this yet!!! I believe because my android versions are still fairly small, they're just standalone downloads rather than game updates, but the saves should still transfer. the android port on f95 may be from a different porter and could be worth trying... i'm really sorry i wish I could be more helpful 🥺
Heya, on the choice between calling Mallory or Lily, I called Mallory first and when the conversation ended and I was meant to get the prompt to call Lily, I got this error (seems the choice menu that has only "Lily" on it is missing).
hello!!! i'm so sorry you experienced this error. it's something i have fixed already but would require you to download a patch. if you talk to lily first and then mallory, you should be able to ignore this error and not miss anything. i'm so sorry i know getting errors is frustrating and immersion breaking. it's tricky coding paths with dozens of choices 😅
Hey, I actually reloaded the choice after seeing this reply, picked Lily first and then talked to Mallory, but once the Mallory call ends I get the same error.
Don't worry about such mistakes haha, part of the reason I like to play WIPs is to find and report such things, so future players can have a smoother experience - it's rewarding on its own way!
I downloaded the game this morning, did you upload the fixed version just today? If you haven't imo you should, or at least add the patch as a downloadable file so players can patch the game.
Ok... Love The game So far But I'm Only at the Very Beginning. and I tried to play at Joiplay nut it seems it's not compatible cuz everytime I tried to open it it Immediately Closes, so the best thing is the Android Version and the runs But... just a Little thing I encountered is Some texts are not read able cuz they Dont show up the whole thing, Like this for example, the text is. waaay on the Left. and this is only happening if there's to Character talking at the same time.
OMG!!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT DID I JUST READ!!!!!AHHHHH THIS WAS THE MOST AMAZING WELL WRITTEN VISUAL NOVEL EVER I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER FIND A VISUAL NOVEL THAT WOULD HIT ME IN THE FEELS BUT THIS ONE IS JUST SOO FREAKING GOOD,I HAVE BEEN PLAYING VISUAL NOVELS FOR MORE THAN 4 YEARS NOW AND FOR THE ENTIRETY OF THAT TIME ETERNUM WAS THE ONLY ONE WITH SOME OTHERS THAT REALLY CAUGHT MY ATTENTION BUT THIS OMG I THINK IF I BEGIN TO EXPLAIN EVERYTHING I LIKED ABOUT THIS NOVEL I WOULD PROBABLY END UP WRITING MORE THAN 100 PAGES I KID YOU NOT(YES I AM SCREAMING IN MY MIND TYPING IN ALL CAPITAL!!!)ANYWAYS I LOVED YOUR NOVEL SOOOOOOOOOOO FREAKING MUCH,YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER AND I REALLY REALLY APPRECIATE YOU FOR MAKING THIS GAME,I HOPE YOUR LIFE IS GOING THE WAY YOU WANT AND I HOPE EVERYTHING TURNS GOOD FOR YOU AND I WILL BE EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE,BEST OF LUCK YOU GOT YOURSELF A LOYAL FAN!! ILYSM :)
Just an FYI, Mega stopped at 1.2 gbs download of 2.2gbs. For some like me, its means your title cannot be played. Before anyone gripes, tried 4 times and I'm using a wired ethernet cable but mega has been causing problem for downloaders lately.
Wow, I'm just totally bedazzled; from the description, I had a general idea, but in less than 5 minutes I was already gobsmacked. The dialogues and the MC's introspection, particularly, are incredibly deep. The talk between Dad and Desmond was soul-moving. The girls are all using one or more trope.
And the comedy! By the Nine Circles of Hell, that scene at the onsen with Ken and everybody else! The scene with Mallory in her room when her parents arrive! And the lingerie store!
The models are great, the lewd scenes quite tasty, but the story is just so amazing! If you ever feel a bit more adventurous, I'd say this game's story and plots and characters could help you a lot in writing a small series of books based on this. Just sayin'...
Tldr; this game is shaping up to be an amazing work of art!
Definitely fav'ing and following!
P.S.: The only part that I'm actually wary about is the ammount of characters; as you build the game towards the conclusion, it will inevitably become more difficult to manage exposure and revelation for all of them without leaving loose ends. Still and regardless, I wish you the best of luck!
I love discovering avn games like these where you come to goon and stay for the plot. First i played was eternum and ghaddamn i discovered more and more. At first i thought your game was a yuri game but then i decided to give it a chance and boy did i enjoy. I really live how you e written each character and the story... and the scenes ghad *chefs kiss* i look forward to the next update!
Also i got surprised when there was a voice over narration and it was good! I look forward for more! More scenes, more in depth story! More funny memes!
Absolutely stunning game with a really fetching MC character. I really enjoyed the refreshing personality, and all the girls were fascinating. It's always great coming across a game that takes itself seriously, but then you can have amazingly goofy meme'y moments that add even more personality to the world you create while having a great laugh.
It was incredible to see the improvements in the animation you made too after a few scenes. People normally want to see perfection in a game the moment they download it, and expect everything to be flawless. However, leaving in rougher work, and then showing off how you've overcome it later really is admirable.
Thanks again for putting so much time, work, and passion into a game like this. Looking forward to see how things advance later on, and you've got a huge fan in me!
waooo this is so sweet!! thank you so much. i do feel like i have come a long way since i started this game with absolutely zero experience in any part of it, so it's nice to hear someone confirm it!! it means so much to me that you enjoy the characters as well :') i hope you will continue to enjoy the game as it updates
just found this avn the other day and, the writing in this is phenomenal in my opinion. All the characters seem decently realistic, 3 deletional characters who have lived their own lives sperate from the mc and not that they only exist for this story. as for the graphics, not the best I've seen in this engine but, at chapter 3 it does look quite good I'd say.
honestly my only real criticism is a technical one, in dark scenes, character whose name are dark colours, you can't see their names (I noticed it for the character that Blue and Red were talking to in the second to last scene of the 0.3 update)
thank you so much for the kind words! i absolutely agree that my game needs work visually, but i'm happy you agree that it improves as it goes along. i plan on remaking the first chapter entirely at some point for this reason, including updating the animations as i have learned so much since i started. more than anything, though, it means so much to me that you enjoy the characters and writing as that's been the most important aspect to me. I have never seen the word "deletional" omg that's awesome
As for the font being hard to read, that was on purpose for that specific character as you're not supposed to know their name, but maybe it wasn't the best idea xD haha thank you so much again for playing my game!! I hope you will enjoy chapter 4 next month!
rereading my comment, yeah I've never heard of the word deletional before, it was probably either auto correct or me being really tired while I wrote it, and yes, deletional is a real word but no, it was obviously not used correctly, I don't even remember what I meant to write there.
I did enjoy the game mostly...i skipped the dudes talking...cause its avn i dont play for dudes...also rejected the trans cause im a guy and not gay but to each their own....im so glad sasha is safe! I was scared there...i hope in future update you give us choices...like to spare or to kill our enemies...was hoping i could kill the rich guy and his son...and the female that betrayed me...shes getting rejected next time...anyway cant wait for more if theres gonna be more
the only thing i hate about this VN is that I found it too early. now i have to wait for it to get finished but holy shit this is a good story perfect mix of comedy, romance, and deep story telling. I'm looking forward to the completion of this how ever many years that will take.
the scene where the mc and sasha hold hands after going berserk aka that house getting burned down thought there was a graphical glitch where mc's hand is twisted 180 deg and sasha's thumb goes through mc's palm
The first two h-scenes are not animated (the first half of chapter 1 just has images that repeat to simulate scenes) but the rest of the game does, and they slowly improve as the game goes on. I develop this game on an old laptop, and animating took me a while to figure out 😅 I'm sorry if that's a dealbreaker. I do intend on remaking the chapter 1 scenes at some point, but I'm more focused on progressing the story currently!
its not a dealbreaker if it does happen after the first two its okay 🫶🏼 im just a motion guy yk? im glad you're working on the avn and im stoked to give it a try :>
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I'm just gonna say: Bald girls are highly underrated. Glad to finally see a porn game with one
Ain't no fucking way this guy just said " a mimir" xD
¿Eres latino de pura casualidad?
This game might actually be peak. Good shit cure!!!
Is the 'futa/trans, gay' avoidable?
As stated in the FAQ:
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Finished playing through the redo of Chapter 1. Really enjoyed it, the rewriting is much better paced and things feel like they happen way less abruptly. Plus the ramen scene was a fun way to foreshadow things.
有中文吗
There are currently no translations for my game, but I'd love to make a Chinese translation in the future!
So I download the Android version from the MEGA link and it's asking me this. Why would it need access to my photos and files? Is this normal?
yeah, as far as i know, this is a pretty normal thing. i think it's asking in a roundabout way for storage permissions (this is what some barebones research tells me as i don't have an android myself). i absolutely would understand being uncomfortable with this kind of permission request, but from what i can tell it's very normal and common. i can tell you that i trust blackeye (my android porter) and this specific update has been downloaded a few thousand times without complaint, but i'm sorry i don't have more info about why it asks that!
That is a weird way to ask for storage permission but if the creator of the game trusts the program and no one else in the comments have brought this issue up, I'm going to take a chance. Will let you know if anything weird happens and thanks for replying so fast!
First Question did you download the game from devs page on itchio if not it could be a reworked game with virus. Most of these games you find on itchio don’t have viruses but I have in the past have had a few flagged by Norton. If you are using a device you buy items with or have personal info on. I would advise against allowing anyone access. The reason for photo access is some people take pictures of their account passwords and email passwords. Chuckles here’s a tip when ever you get a new device make sure you take out the memory chip out of the old device. If you don’t and you lose it or leave it when you move you never know who may get their hands on your info.
Yeah I downloaded it from the devs page.
The computer download address is wrong
may I ask which one? They all seem to be working for me :)
Just finished .4 with ch1 redone. Here are my thoughts so far.
First, this story is incredible. The originality, and urban fantasy elements make this a fun and engaging story. The artwork is very well done, as are the animations. I'm sure I'll be happy to start over when chapter 2 is reworked, and more content is available.
The characters are all individual, and special. The dialogue for each of them is believable. Nice jobe there. Except for a few spelling mistakes, the only dialogue mistake I saw was near the beginning, when the liquor store lady was yelling at Sasha. She said she'd call the polizia, not the police.
I am enjoying the shit out of this. The only negative for me is the bits of chaotic text and imagery. You know, those moments of high emotion that cause the characters to act like they are in an old Japanese cartoon. They are too unfocused and chaotic for my tastes. I realize this was done on purpose, it's part of the author's telling of the story. So I will live with it. Just voicing my opinion.
All in all, very well done so far, and I look forward to the next major update.
Maybe the lady Is italian xD
MEGA link dead
which one? They all seem to be working fine for me :) i included a few mirrors in the game info page as well as on my patreon, if you'd like to try another! sorry about that issue
Just needed to comment: This is genuinely one of the more well-written VNs I've played recently. It's consistently engaging, its paced really well, and you've made the characters (and protag) so incredibly likeable in a very natural way. The slapstick humor and meta stuff is also done really well -- a lot of times it comes across really heavy-handed in other VNs but you space it out really well.
thank you so much for the kinds words! they really mean a lot. thank you.
So how will the futa thing work because am not into any cuck sharing shit.
Hi just for ask, can we have other way for download ur game ? MEGA is quite difficult for download it, never work
what website do you usually like to download from? i'm currently uploading the most recent update to patreon, so i can make sure to try to include a different mirror next time
Maybe have it download from Itch, or Google drive? I agree that MEGA sucks. Unless you pay for MEGA itself, it's too easy to run into download caps.
Itch doesn't let you upload files bigger than 1GB for the most part and GDrive has similar throttling limits wahhh. I uploaded a MixDrop link, and I hope that works! If it doesn't, there are additional mirrors available linked from my Patreon post. Sorry for the headache! I hope you guys enjoy the update :')
Hello ! I downloaded the game months ago and only just played it (i have only up to chapter 3 so this may have been fixed), but in the scene where mc (wake, i believe) has blue eyes and is in byrus' home, the maid says "ta guele". However, it should be "ta gueule" for it to be an actual french shut up, hope it helps (also, amazing game, love the story, the jokes and everything, music is good, as you said, and there's a lot of cultural references I love, keep going !
thank you so much!!! there is more french in chapter 4 so if you get around to playing more of the game, please let me know if you find any more errors xD I really appreciate it! <3
Hello, I played Chapter 4 and didn't see anything that seemed wrong (though it is a bit old-fashioned and no one really speaks like that nowadays, but I don't expect any slang, especially if she's been a maid all her life)
I tried to make her dialogue sound overly dramatic and almost like she was cursing people lmao as long as it makes sense!! thank you so much for the help!! :)
这个游戏有中文翻译嘛？
no, there are currently no translations that I know of, but I would love to make one in the future!
加油，我相信你
I love the game. It is definitely in my top 5. The story is absolutely wonderful and I enjoy how you ease into the tenser aspects as well as how much personality you give to all the characters. You are doing great.
thank you so much!! that's so kind of you to say :') i hope you will continue to enjoy future updates!!
I really like your game. The writing is very well done with just the right amount of comedy. My only real critique would be the enormous boobs way too many of the girls seem to have (Abby, Sasha and Emma are just right). I hope you're able to put out updates fairly often because I'm very much enjoying this.
I'm gonna be honest if I was in the MC's situation and the first thing that happens when I walk into school is the guy on the intercom calling me out and revealing everything about my situation to everyone...
I think I'd die of a heart attack right then and there... That's just uncalled for intercom guy.
Just finished your game so far! i loved it :) wanted to join the discord but the link doesn't work :( neither ingame nor here from the website
wahhh, really?! that's so weird i'm so sorry!
Here's a new link! I really hope to see you in there!!
Just finish playing your game bro I love it the MC have sense of humour and funny sometimes when will be your next update.
Just finished Chapter 4, I really enjoyed the work you've done so far and look forward to future updates
thanks for the kind words wren :)
Hello, first off wanted to let you know I'm loving the game so far. The story is exciting, and the characters are wonderful. I saw that you don't do the port for the android version yourself, but wanted to mention anyways that replaying scenes in the gallery doesnt seem to be working right. When you click on a scene, the box pops up with the mouse click options. But no matter where i click on the screen, it just backs out to the previous menu screen.
🤦♂️ man how am i only now learning this?! thanks for bringing it to my attention. hopefully i can get the porters to do something about this <3 i'm really sorry!!
No worries, glad I was able to bring it to your attwntuon. Hopefully it's something that is easy to sort out.
Once again, loving the game and story, looking forward to what you bring us next.
0.3 was wonderful. It looks like the Android version of 0.4 won't update the 0.3 version, though, and tries to make a second install of the game. It also gives me an error about incorrect/out-of-date app permissions, which the 0.3 version didn't have.
i don't make the android ports myself (I don't have an android and can't test them), but I haven't had any issues reported like this yet!!! I believe because my android versions are still fairly small, they're just standalone downloads rather than game updates, but the saves should still transfer. the android port on f95 may be from a different porter and could be worth trying... i'm really sorry i wish I could be more helpful 🥺
No worries, I can use my PC.
Heya, on the choice between calling Mallory or Lily, I called Mallory first and when the conversation ended and I was meant to get the prompt to call Lily, I got this error (seems the choice menu that has only "Lily" on it is missing).
hello!!! i'm so sorry you experienced this error. it's something i have fixed already but would require you to download a patch. if you talk to lily first and then mallory, you should be able to ignore this error and not miss anything. i'm so sorry i know getting errors is frustrating and immersion breaking. it's tricky coding paths with dozens of choices 😅
Hey, I actually reloaded the choice after seeing this reply, picked Lily first and then talked to Mallory, but once the Mallory call ends I get the same error.
Don't worry about such mistakes haha, part of the reason I like to play WIPs is to find and report such things, so future players can have a smoother experience - it's rewarding on its own way!
I downloaded the game this morning, did you upload the fixed version just today? If you haven't imo you should, or at least add the patch as a downloadable file so players can patch the game.
Can you wife the girls in this game?
Ok... Love The game So far But I'm Only at the Very Beginning. and I tried to play at Joiplay nut it seems it's not compatible cuz everytime I tried to open it it Immediately Closes, so the best thing is the Android Version and the runs But... just a Little thing I encountered is Some texts are not read able cuz they Dont show up the whole thing, Like this for example, the text is. waaay on the Left. and this is only happening if there's to Character talking at the same time.
hello!! yeah, this is a problem with some android ports. it will be fixed in future releases. i'm so sorry about this!!
OMG!!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT DID I JUST READ!!!!!AHHHHH THIS WAS THE MOST AMAZING WELL WRITTEN VISUAL NOVEL EVER I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER FIND A VISUAL NOVEL THAT WOULD HIT ME IN THE FEELS BUT THIS ONE IS JUST SOO FREAKING GOOD,I HAVE BEEN PLAYING VISUAL NOVELS FOR MORE THAN 4 YEARS NOW AND FOR THE ENTIRETY OF THAT TIME ETERNUM WAS THE ONLY ONE WITH SOME OTHERS THAT REALLY CAUGHT MY ATTENTION BUT THIS OMG I THINK IF I BEGIN TO EXPLAIN EVERYTHING I LIKED ABOUT THIS NOVEL I WOULD PROBABLY END UP WRITING MORE THAN 100 PAGES I KID YOU NOT(YES I AM SCREAMING IN MY MIND TYPING IN ALL CAPITAL!!!)ANYWAYS I LOVED YOUR NOVEL SOOOOOOOOOOO FREAKING MUCH,YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER AND I REALLY REALLY APPRECIATE YOU FOR MAKING THIS GAME,I HOPE YOUR LIFE IS GOING THE WAY YOU WANT AND I HOPE EVERYTHING TURNS GOOD FOR YOU AND I WILL BE EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE,BEST OF LUCK YOU GOT YOURSELF A LOYAL FAN!! ILYSM :)
You're so nice im gonna cry thank you so much!!! I'm so glad you liked it :3
Just an FYI, Mega stopped at 1.2 gbs download of 2.2gbs. For some like me, its means your title cannot be played. Before anyone gripes, tried 4 times and I'm using a wired ethernet cable but mega has been causing problem for downloaders lately.
Wow, I'm just totally bedazzled; from the description, I had a general idea, but in less than 5 minutes I was already gobsmacked. The dialogues and the MC's introspection, particularly, are incredibly deep. The talk between Dad and Desmond was soul-moving. The girls are all using one or more trope.
And the comedy! By the Nine Circles of Hell, that scene at the onsen with Ken and everybody else! The scene with Mallory in her room when her parents arrive! And the lingerie store!
The models are great, the lewd scenes quite tasty, but the story is just so amazing! If you ever feel a bit more adventurous, I'd say this game's story and plots and characters could help you a lot in writing a small series of books based on this. Just sayin'...
Tldr; this game is shaping up to be an amazing work of art!
Definitely fav'ing and following!
P.S.: The only part that I'm actually wary about is the ammount of characters; as you build the game towards the conclusion, it will inevitably become more difficult to manage exposure and revelation for all of them without leaving loose ends. Still and regardless, I wish you the best of luck!
you're so sweet thank you so much 😭😭 I'm so glad you enjoyed it
This game in particular has some great character writing, and really fantastic H-scenes. Really looking forward to more!
😭 waooo thank you so much!!! new update just released today <3
yea this is peak
thank you i'm glad you like it!!! I just released chapter 4 which will be public next week :3
read this and smiled bro, cant wait
you're so nice to me 🥺 thank you i hope you'll enjoy it!!
You sir/ma'am have... COOKED.
I love discovering avn games like these where you come to goon and stay for the plot. First i played was eternum and ghaddamn i discovered more and more. At first i thought your game was a yuri game but then i decided to give it a chance and boy did i enjoy. I really live how you e written each character and the story... and the scenes ghad *chefs kiss* i look forward to the next update!
Also i got surprised when there was a voice over narration and it was good! I look forward for more! More scenes, more in depth story! More funny memes!
sorry i'm only seeing this now, but thank you for the kind comment! i'm really glad you enjoyed it <3
Absolutely stunning game with a really fetching MC character. I really enjoyed the refreshing personality, and all the girls were fascinating. It's always great coming across a game that takes itself seriously, but then you can have amazingly goofy meme'y moments that add even more personality to the world you create while having a great laugh.
It was incredible to see the improvements in the animation you made too after a few scenes. People normally want to see perfection in a game the moment they download it, and expect everything to be flawless. However, leaving in rougher work, and then showing off how you've overcome it later really is admirable.
Thanks again for putting so much time, work, and passion into a game like this. Looking forward to see how things advance later on, and you've got a huge fan in me!
waooo this is so sweet!! thank you so much. i do feel like i have come a long way since i started this game with absolutely zero experience in any part of it, so it's nice to hear someone confirm it!! it means so much to me that you enjoy the characters as well :') i hope you will continue to enjoy the game as it updates
just found this avn the other day and, the writing in this is phenomenal in my opinion. All the characters seem decently realistic, 3 deletional characters who have lived their own lives sperate from the mc and not that they only exist for this story. as for the graphics, not the best I've seen in this engine but, at chapter 3 it does look quite good I'd say.
honestly my only real criticism is a technical one, in dark scenes, character whose name are dark colours, you can't see their names (I noticed it for the character that Blue and Red were talking to in the second to last scene of the 0.3 update)
thank you so much for the kind words! i absolutely agree that my game needs work visually, but i'm happy you agree that it improves as it goes along. i plan on remaking the first chapter entirely at some point for this reason, including updating the animations as i have learned so much since i started. more than anything, though, it means so much to me that you enjoy the characters and writing as that's been the most important aspect to me. I have never seen the word "deletional" omg that's awesome
As for the font being hard to read, that was on purpose for that specific character as you're not supposed to know their name, but maybe it wasn't the best idea xD haha thank you so much again for playing my game!! I hope you will enjoy chapter 4 next month!
rereading my comment, yeah I've never heard of the word deletional before, it was probably either auto correct or me being really tired while I wrote it, and yes, deletional is a real word but no, it was obviously not used correctly, I don't even remember what I meant to write there.
I did enjoy the game mostly...i skipped the dudes talking...cause its avn i dont play for dudes...also rejected the trans cause im a guy and not gay but to each their own....im so glad sasha is safe! I was scared there...i hope in future update you give us choices...like to spare or to kill our enemies...was hoping i could kill the rich guy and his son...and the female that betrayed me...shes getting rejected next time...anyway cant wait for more if theres gonna be more
Merry Christmas 🎄 🎁 🎄
Holy moly. I'm hooked. AND THE MOMENT YOU ABSOLUTELY HOOKED ME WAS THE END OF THE UPDAAAAATE.
the only thing i hate about this VN is that I found it too early. now i have to wait for it to get finished but holy shit this is a good story perfect mix of comedy, romance, and deep story telling. I'm looking forward to the completion of this how ever many years that will take.
the scene where the mc and sasha hold hands after going berserk aka that house getting burned down thought there was a graphical glitch where mc's hand is twisted 180 deg and sasha's thumb goes through mc's palm
Oh man, that sounds bad! I'll have to double check that when I get a chance. Thanks for letting me know!!
is this animated?
The first two h-scenes are not animated (the first half of chapter 1 just has images that repeat to simulate scenes) but the rest of the game does, and they slowly improve as the game goes on. I develop this game on an old laptop, and animating took me a while to figure out 😅 I'm sorry if that's a dealbreaker. I do intend on remaking the chapter 1 scenes at some point, but I'm more focused on progressing the story currently!
its not a dealbreaker if it does happen after the first two its okay 🫶🏼 im just a motion guy yk? im glad you're working on the avn and im stoked to give it a try :>